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[Jungle Girl Lydia test]

work needed

well done for getting the logs to work but
it needs work sound a few more levels of varying diffiulty it would be nice to restart on the the level you died on and if the snakes dont work keep them out until they do
the survive button should not have to hide behind the snakes
the background could vary a little from stage to stage
and i think thaat lidi could struggle a bit as she drowns
so there is plenty to improve on next time
good luck with your next upload and sorry if I seem harsh
i also apologise for my lack of punctuation

TBoneQSLO responds:

That's ok. I do understand that more work needs to be done.

I did have the girl standing on the logs as they were moving if you saw my 2009 update, but because of the code the logs could not move once you get past the first screen or died and had to start over with the logs unable to move.

So what I did was that I commented out the functions with a // in the actionscript code and tried instead to move the logs using an animated movie.

I will try to make the logs pause in the next update so you can stand on them, but when they move again you will have to jump off.

Because of my limited programming ability this is the reason why it is not as good as I wanted it to be.

Thank you for commenting and taking the time and I don't mind about your score of 2 out of 10, I would have given myself the same thing if I released this game onto the shops half finished.

That is why I mentioned that this was only a test to see how people thought of it and where I need to improve on before I submit the next update.

[Super Adventure Game Land]

crazy

absluty mad i love it keep those ideas coming
but it would be nice if you said press a to attack that nasty villain beacause that means that you wont have lost half of your health reading about that nasty villain

squidly responds:

It says in the instructions in the main menu too, you know.
But yeah, I should give a warning of some sorts before hand.

[WoW Character Generator]

its ok

i have one problem i made 24 characters and they were all female and then i got 1 male one. could you fix that
otherwise well done

shikamaru-nara responds:

Well.. When the gender is chosen, a number is created, either 1 or 2. If this number turns out to be 1, it'll be a male, though if the number is 2, it will be a female.
I could of course edit it so that the number is a random on between 1 and 10, if it's an even number the character will be a male, and if it's an odd number it'll be a female. Though i don't know whether or not it would help. I'll check if it gets better when I can. ;)

Thanks for the review and the feedback. ^^